Dear Mum & Dad

I’m 9 nearly 10 most of my freinds have a phone. They always ask what my phone number is on the bus. I can’t tell them I don’t have a phone but I wish I did. Read on!

Let me start of with how much money a phone is. A phone is a lot more money than I have. I’m 9 I go to school you don’t get paid for going to school. You should. It’s hard being a kid. We should get paid for living through it. In the next paragraph I will tell you how educating it would be and it would ceep me quiat.

A phone would ceep me quiat and educate me. When I’m at home I’m always bored. At home other than home work I’m not doing anything educating. I can download apps that help me lern more.

Now you know why I want a phone. A phone will ceep me quit and educate me. A phone is a lot more than I have I hope I get a phone.

From Harry

 

7 Replies to “Dear Mum & Dad”

  1. This is a piece of creative writing that Harry did at school. It is a direct copy, spelling mistakes and all. The feedback from his teacher was “I hope you get a phone. Great paper!”

    1. I’ve told him he can have one next weekend if he spends this week calling his friends and talking to them from the landline. He doesn’t want a phone any more!

  2. Neil…… I’m afraid,as the saying goes, ‘ When you are in Rome, you have to do what the Romans do’.

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